20/20 Essay Writing Masterclass

Your personal roadmap to achieving English marks in the upper A range

I'm excited to be sharing with you my proven system for helping you master the nine core skills necessary to becoming a consistent top student in English. After attaining my own state rank and refining my methods through more than five years of teaching 150+ students, I have distilled all my most valuable lesson content into the following masterclass available to your right now!

You’ve been granted access to this page because I think you are best placed to benefit immensely from the program. You learnt all about it in my webinar (linked in my original email). Please give it some careful consideration over the next few days as this oppurtunity time-sensitive.

English Advanced is the most important subject of your HSC

Yet...

It is also the most confusing with no syllabus dot points to memorise that can lead you down a linear path to success.

The marking schema of English assessments often seem cryptic and inconsistently applied between teachers/schools.

School teachers, tutoring centres and private tutors can all offer slightly different, and even sometimes contradictory advice which is extremely frustrating and stressful.

I created this masterclass to address the shortcomings of how English is traditionally taught.

My aim is to offer even greater value and shorten the time to results that you can get from traditional private tutoring.

Within the space of just a few sessions, you will learn all the skills necessary to start self-sufficiently crafting up a A range worthy essays and be equipped with a wealth of 20/20 exemplar resources to give you an unfair advantage doing your HSC year.

Are you ready to take the risk and guesswork out of English?

Hi there!

I'm Jess.

After graduating from Meriden School and attaining a state rank of 2nd in NSW in English Extension 1 and 2nd in NSW in Latin Extension, achieving an ATAR of 99.95, I've honed my experience as a dedicated English tutor for over five years.

I've garnered extensive experience tutoring English both at a specialist English tuition firm and privately. This has allowed me to gain insider's knowledge of the HSC syllabus and develop a system for helping students accelerate their improvement in English and achieve top marks consistently. My expertise in the subject has been further developed by majoring in English Literature in my undergraduate at the University of Sydney, for which I was on the Dean's Honours List.

I hope to pass my roadmap to succeeding in HSC English onto you! I know it's going to have huge implications for your HSC English journey.

This masterclass is for you IF

1

You've been getting inconsistent/poor results in English and would like to rapidly improve your marks

I will show you the exact method behind crafting the 20/20 worthy response so you can efficiently adopt these strategies and leverage them straight away in your next exam.

There is a common misconception that English marking is subjective and English skills are inherent - you either have them or you don't. This couldn’t be further from the truth.

Through my experience tutoring I have witnessed students who used to achieve B and C range marks become consistent A range students by targeted development of the exact essay writing skills I will impart to you.

2

You've been achieving consistent A range results already but are looking for further support in this high-stakes subject

I will help you fully dial in your essay writing skills to help you solidify English as your powerhouse subject which will distinguish you from your peers.

You will be privy to the tips and tricks only state rankers know to help you potentially achieve 95+ in English Advanced.

You will ramp up your intention and confidence to a whole new level with the chance to get one-on-one mentoring from a state rank tutor (Accelerator Package) to help you achieve your fullest potential in this subject.

By the End of This Program,

You'll Have Mastered:

I will take you through executing each of these skills to a 20/20 level with

lots of examples and exam style questions based on HSC texts

How much does this cost?

For context, I have been teaching one-on-one lessons for $150 per hour with a waitlist of 50+ students for many years. In the space of 4x 60 minute lessons ($600), we would cover approximately 10% of what you'll learn in the masterclass. That's one way of putting the value into context.

Here are your other options in this space:

🎓 Finding English tutors that have a state rank result (verified top achievers) can be very difficult, with many of them fully booked up year round. This means going without any English help for important upcoming exams potentially indefinitely.

💸 Tutoring centres charge upwards of $1000 at the low end and $2500 at the high end per term. “Premium” tutoring centres specialising in English charge very high (and for some students unattainable) prices by justifying that they are gatekeeping exclusive knowledge and content.

❌ Finding the right English tutoring solution becomes an exhaustive process of trial and error (mostly error) while your school assessments hang in the balance.

This masterclass is just a fraction of the price that you would spend for just ONE TERM at a traditional tutoring centre and less than a few one-on-one lessons with myself.

Enough spiel - here's the price.

Choose Your Package

Essentials

$697

Great Value

✔ My complete 20/20 system video course ($3600)

✔ 3 months of Pro Plan access to Dodie - 60 000 words of feedback ($2400)

✔ My original state rank essay ($97)

(2nd in NSW English Extension 1)

✔ Glossary of English Techniques ($100)

✔ 20/20 Essay Writing Checklist ($47)

Complete

$997

Most Popular

✔ Everything in the Essentials Package ($6244 value)

PLUS

✔ 75+ state ranking and 20/20 essays ($3000)

✔ ALL future essay requests/updates

✔ Unlimited forever free access to DodieChat ($1997)

Accelerator

$1047

Individualised Support

✔ Everything in the Complete Package ($11 241 value)

PLUS

✔ Reserve your spot for weekly lessons with a state rank tutor

✔ Intake T4 this year

✔ Your $50 waitlist deposit will be credited towards your first term

You're backed by my 7-day money back guarantee

I want to give you the chance to make a no-risk informed decision.

The only way that you can do that is to see what’s on the inside.

And so, you have the option to enrol and gain full access to just Module 1 of the masterclass to see if you would like to continue completely risk-free.

If within 7 days of your enrolment, you decide that the masterclass is not for you, no hard feelings at all.

I hope you can see that you only make this kind of guarantee when you're confident that what you have is going to make a big difference. I'm fairly confident that when you join the master class, you’re getting exactly what you need to unlock HSC English.

And so, I want to completely de-risk this decision for you.

How do I know this works?

I have taught a 150+ students over the last 5+ years. These are the results of my past students:

96%

Received a Band 6

95+

1/3 of all students for English Adv.

100%

Received an E4 in English Ext. 1

Hear from my past students

"Jessica is an amazing tutor who helped me improve so much in English throughout Year 11 and 12. She is both passionate about English, as well as extremely dedicated to her role as a tutor, always being willing to answer my questions and give feedback, even outside of lessons. Her lessons really helped me focus on improving my weaknesses, especially in crafting concise, yet sophisticated arguments for essays, as well as developing and expanding on ideas for creatives, which was something I struggled with a lot before having her has a tutor. In addition to this, Jessica has helped immensely with improving my exam technique, including deconstructing essay questions, and fluently adapting responses to harder prompts. As well as being a fantastic tutor, Jessica cares a lot about her students and was so encouraging and supportive of me, even in non-English related matters. I definitely could not have done so well in English without Jessica’s help! I highly recommend Jessica as a tutor.”​

Lilian

Meriden School

★★★★★

"Jess is a fantastic English tutor who helped me to both improve my marks and enjoy English again. She was the perfect tutor for me as she not only helped edit my work but also taught me content relating to my various English modules, providing me with new, critical perspectives on the texts I was studying, thus allowing me to further develop my own ideas. She also was able to identify my key weaknesses in the subject (specifically my exam technique) which we would work on together, allowing me to excel in both my hand in assignments and in my written exams. Furthermore, Jess knows the HSC system inside out and helped me to work “smart not hard” which helped me avoid burning out (this is vital in year 12). I’ve had a few English tutors in the past but ultimately Jess was my favourite and helped me achieve my band six goal in English." ​

Anna

St Catherines

★★★★★

What you're getting in the Complete Package

STEP 01

My 20/20 System

  • You'll get access to my premium interactive video course consisting of 48+ video lessons centred on building the 9 writing skills necessary to achieving at an upper A range level. (24 x $150 = $3600 value)

  • I will show you the exact method behind executing each to a 20/20 standard for the HSC so you can confidently apply them to your writing from here on out.

  • I usually go through this program over the course of several months with my 1:1 students but you can get access right away!

  • You will get access all the way until the end of your HSC, regardless of when you enrolled.

The Curriculum

⛰️ Module 1 - State Rank Principles

In this module, we'll reinvent the foundational aspects of essay writing through the lens of state rank principles and 20/20 frameworks. We will deconstruct exactly how to construct a 20/20 topic sentence and development statement with comprehensive examples and exercises. You’ll learn the precise elements you’ll need to include in a successful subpoint – the basic building block of any analytical argument. Not only that, I will show you how to elevate your construction of the "basic building block" through my special method.

I will also expose the common pitfalls students make when trying to execute the fundamentals of quote selection, technique selection, and analysis. In contrast, you'll learn how to craft standout essay responses by executing on the basics flawlessly.

By the end of this module, you'll be equipped with state ranking and proven 20/20 essay writing frameworks for both the macro and micro elements of essay writing. You’ll also be brimming with 150+ high-quality techniques that you can deploy to analyse any text with standout sophistication.

✏️ Module 2 - Short Story Deep Dive

Using a challenging short story as a case study, I will take you through the process of granular textual annotation to demonstrate how you can fully deconstruct any text to unearth unique and sophisticated insights. I will impart to you my foolproof systematic text-unpacking approach.

I have especially selected this short story because of its thematic versatility and quality of the analytical material. In addition, it addresses complex elements of historical context and philosophical ways of thinking. As such, a close study of this text will help you efficiently level up your skills of critical appraisal which you can leverage to tackle any school text from here on out. Also, this was the related text I used for my state ranking essay (perhaps you could consider using it too 😉).

By the end of this module, you will have the skills to annotate and unpack the ideas of any unseen text skilfully and efficiently – whether this be your school's prescribed texts or unseen passages in Common Module comprehension tasks.

💪 Module 3 - Strong Arguments

I will take you through applying our robust 20/20 essay writing frameworks that were consolidated in Module One, to the short story case study from Module Two. You’ll learn my infallible method behind how to construct a strong argument for ANY text, every time. Not only that, you’ll level up your essay writing skills through immediate application and have the chance to seek feedback on your writing from myself.

In addition, I will demystify how to write about FORM, which is an essential element always skilfully embedded in top scoring essays. We will unpack exactly what it entails, why it’s important and how to analyse it, using HSC prescribed texts as examples.

Not only that, I will shine light on the biggest trap students fall into in analytical writing – storytelling. You’ll learn why it’s so harmful, exactly how to recognise when you’re lapsing into the habit and how to instead transform fluffy prose into insightful analysis.

🧠 Module 4 - Exam Techniques

Arguably the most important module, I will teach you how to bring together all the frameworks and skills we’ve developed to help you actually perform well on exam day. I’ll break down my approach to the contentious question – to memorise or not to memorise? You’ll be equipped with my proprietary exam memorisation strategy (with templates!) which allows you to be prepared yet flexible.

I’ll teach you exactly how to unpack difficult questions like a top A range student so that you can approach your next school exam with confidence and flair.

By the end of this module, you will not only be equipped with top A range worthy essay writing skills, but the exam strategies which will allow you to exhibit them to their full potential on exam day – when it actually counts.

🔥 Module 5 - The HSC Modules

I will teach you how to write in the language required to score top marks for each HSC module. Different modules present different theoretical “lenses” through which NESA wants you to analyse your prescribed texts. These requirements are confusing and challenging for students to interpret, and often poorly communicated by schools.

You’ll get special insight into my exact systems for achieving 20/20 for each module: Common Module, Module A and Module B. Boost your exam results through module-specific checklists and 20/20 examples proven to deliver top A-range marks.

STEP 02

State Rank Guidance

  • You will get access to state rank guidance 24/7 in the form of Dodie.ai (3 months of Pro Plan access)

  • Dodie.ai combines the 20/20 frameworks in the masterclass with large language models to bring you gold standard quality feedback completely tailored to your writing so you can improve through faster feedback loops

  • The software has been extensively tested and validated by myself as well as a plethora of other state rankers

STEP 03

A wealth of resources

  • You will get access to my entire resource bank of 75+ state ranking and full mark exemplar essays. (75 x $40 = $3000 value)

  • You will have the ability to request your HSC texts if they are not already included in the collection and will automatically be grandfathered into all future updates.

  • Included is my original essay that allowed me to state rank 2nd in NSW in English Extension 1, so you can see the method behind the construction of a proven top response.

You will also get these additional bonuses to fast-track your way to top marks

BONUS 01

Glossary of English

Techniques

  • A-Z glossary of 150+ sophisticated English techniques with definitions and high quality examples ($100 value)

  • Craft standout essays by making the process of producing sophisticated textual analysis almost effortless

BONUS 02

Exclusive Access to DodieChat

  • DodieChat is trained on all the resources and expertise in the masterclass, making it a perfect English study companion.

  • Access to DodieChat like having a state ranking tutor in your back pocket, available 24/7 to answer your questions, big or small.

  • Simply type to chat!

Choose Your Package

Essentials

$697

Great Value

✔ My complete 20/20 system video course ($3600)

✔ 3 months of Pro Plan access to Dodie - 60 000 words of feedback ($2400)

✔ My original state rank essay ($97)

(2nd in NSW English Extension 1)

✔ Glossary of English Techniques ($100)

✔ 20/20 Essay Writing Checklist ($47)

Complete

$997

Most Popular

✔ Everything in the Essentials Package ($6244 value)

PLUS

✔ 75+ state ranking and 20/20 essays ($3000)

✔ ALL future essay requests/updates

✔ Unlimited forever free access to DodieChat ($1997)

Accelerator

$1047

Individualised Support

✔ Everything in the Complete Package ($11 241 value)

PLUS

✔ Reserve your spot for weekly lessons with a state rank tutor

✔ Intake T4 this year

✔ Your $50 waitlist deposit will be credited towards your first term

Remember, you're backed by my 7-day money back guarantee

I want to give you the chance to make a no-risk informed decision.

The only way that you can do that is to see what’s on the inside.

And so, you have the option to enrol and gain full access to just Module 1 of the masterclass to see if you would like to continue completely risk-free.

If within 7 days of your enrolment, you decide that the masterclass is not for you, no hard feelings at all.

I hope you can see that you only make this kind of guarantee when you're confident that what you have is going to make a big difference. I'm fairly confident that when you join the master class, you’re getting exactly what you need to unlock HSC English.

And so, I want to completely de-risk this decision for you.

FAQs

Here's what other students have asked before clicking enrol!

Who is this masterclass best suited for?

This masterclass is designed for students aiming to achieve upper A range marks in English and are willing to put in the necessary effort. It is best suited for senior English students in Years 10 to 12, but even junior students can benefit from it. The masterclass covers essay writing from the fundamentals, providing a solid foundation but also offers challenging content and HSC-specific resources for future reference. Regardless of when you purchase it during your HSC journey, you will have access until the end of your graduation year.

There are three types of students who can benefit from this masterclass:

- If you’re already a high achiever but would like to solidify English as your powerhouse subject.

- If you’re getting average/inconsistent results and you’d like to rapidly improve.

- If you struggle with English (because we start from the fundamentals) but nevertheless are self motivated for your improvement in this subject.

This isn’t a magic pill that can get you overnight results with very little effort involved. But this is a proven system to help driven students willing to put in the work, gain top marks in the most efficient way possible.

How long will it take to complete?

About 10 sessions of highly focused work, depending on your efficiency. Because of the self paced nature of this task course, you have the freedom to complete it in bite size chunks and at your convenience. It’s totally possible for you to complete in less than a month. However you may want to spread it out over several weekends and finish it over a longer period of time.

I'm looking for weekly one-on-one lessons/ I already have a private tutor. Is this still for me?

I totally get this. One-on-one weekly lessons is seen as the gold standard when seeking help in English and I personally understand this feeling because I myself have been a private tutor for more than five years. I’ve already addressed some of the shortcomings of private tutoring in my webinar, including its impracticalities and how many tutors only provide a Band-Aid solution for an upcoming school exam without addressing long-term skill deficiencies.

I created this program to address the shortcomings of private tutoring alone.

I’ve packaged all my knowledge up for you in an online masterclass format so you can access all this high yield information, my step-by-step system right now. You can go at a faster pace, digesting it all within a week, if you put your mind to it.

If you are keen on the extra support weekly online lessons would provide, I offer this in the form of my 20/20 HSC Accelerator Program, which includes the 20/20 Essay Writing Masterclass. Places in the Accelerator are very limited by application only as it exclusively delivered by myself and a very small team of other state rank English tutors.

If you would like to guarantee a spot in the Accelerator for the next academic year, enrol in the masterclass via the Accelerator Package. This involves an extra $50 waitlist deposit which will be credited towards your first term of tutoring.

In addition to this, having a tutor and being a student of this program are not mutually exclusive events. If you have a good private tutor already - that’s great for you, keep going with what’s working! I really believe that this program and having an existing tutor are two sources of help that can work in tandem to bring you the best results.

For a lot of students, it may be that having a private tutor is not necessary at all. I know this because I didn’t personally ever have a private tutor for English in high school and did well regardless. Learning essential skills of the subject, along with receiving feedback at critical moments, maybe enough for you, and in this case my program alone might be a good fit.

It seems expensive for something that is purely online.

Although the delivery is purely online, the masterclass is a very interactive and immersive experience.

I’ve been there through dry and unengaging zoom lectures, and believe me this masterclass is nothing like that at all. I was determined when creating this program that it would not only be high value and informative, but also extremely engaging and interactive.

We get really deep into the texts, annotating together in real time, and I encourage you to take notes in synergy with what I’m doing on screen. There are also many interactive tasks embedded into the modules themselves, making them dynamic and actionable. There are online components to this masterclass but they are there to your advantage. For example, you can replay a section of the lesson over and over to absorb it more fully or if you missed it the first time around. You can’t do this with a live class.

Not only that, you get access to 3 months of Dodie.ai which gives you access to instantaneous feedback at the standard of a state rank English tutor to help you implement and internalise the skills.

This isn’t just an online course, but a holistic system combined with a wealth of resources. I’m committed to giving you the best learning experience possible for the subject.

If I sign up for the Essentials Package can I upgrade to the Complete Package later?

Yes, but it will be slightly more expensive than commiting to the Complete Package the first time around (due to the administration fee of $50 involved in changing packages).

What if I don't have time to complete the masterclass right now?

You may have come across this workshop in the middle of a busy assessment period, and I understand that it may not be the best time for you begin it right now.

Remember that you can enrol in my program, and gain access to it and all the resources instantly. But you can start the masterclass any time convenient to you because you have access all the way until the end of your HSC. That’s the beauty of it being self paced and online. However, the limited time State Rank Creative enrolment bonus expires after the first three days of access. The $200 discount expires after 8 days. So if you think that this could really benefit you, it’s really worth putting some thought into it and acting decisively.

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